I’m Amy Sue Nathan, and my debut novel, THE GLASS WIVES, will be published by St. Martin’s Press in Spring 2013. I’m represented by Jason Yarn of The Paradigm Agency.
If you’d like to read one of my published short stories, try: The April Strings of Amber Sweetly or The Kindness of Neighbors. If you’d like to read personal essays, try: Killer Sandals or Learning to Dance at 40. Want to read my Chicago Trib columns? Click here.
Email me: womensfictionwriters@gmail.com
Follow me on Twitter: @AmySueNathan
I’m also a freelance editor and reader…
Whether it’s your first fifty pages or full manuscript, let me help you make your pages ready for the dreaded Query-Go-Round. Already on the ride and not getting the requests you expected? Let’s figure out why and fix it before you get dizzy!
Want to know if it has a good pace? The right voice? Believable dialogue? Need to find out if you’ve dropped any subplots or if you’ve fallen into the abysmal ‘telling trap’ or gotten stuck in a ‘backstory dump’? I can do that AND I’ll point out what you’re doing right so you can keep doing it!
In addition to working with my own agent for almost a year before he sold THE GLASS WIVES to Brenda Copeland at St. Martin’s, I’ve been reading for literary agents since 2009. I also spent a short time reading for a small press. I read, evaluate and edit literary, commercial, adult and young adult fiction.
Together we can decide if I’m a good fit for you and your book!
For more information, email me about your project and what you’re looking for. amysuenathan@gmail.com or womensfictionwriters@gmail.com
Steve Ross, Director, Book Division, Abrams Artists Agency
“Amy has that rare quality of reading a manuscript from all the requisite perspectives simultaneously: those of the author, the agent, the publisher, and the ultimate consumer. She is also equally adept and authoritative with nonfiction and fiction of seemingly every genre and for just about every age (I haven’t tried her out on picture books yet).”
Holly Root, Waxman Literary Agency says:
“Amy Nathan has a great eye for prose and an exceptional talent for identifying what’s working, and more importantly what isn’t, in an author’s work. Her feedback would be valuable for anyone who’s wondering whether their work is ready to submit.”
Christina Gombar, internationally anthologized, Pushcart Prize nominated author says:
“The most important thing I can say about Amy is that while her criticism is thorough and spot-on, it’s painless. She never makes it personal – and this saves a tremendous amount of energy in defensive reactions (on my part) and the like. A few other readers I’d hired seemed to get off on cutting me down, or were threatened by what I was saying – not focusing on how I was saying it. With Amy it’s all about the writing. I’ve read her own writing and greatly enjoy it — I’d never hire someone to critique my writing if I didn’t value their own work.
Amy is also very up-to-the-minute on blogging and online marketing and networking – she’s been a great source of advice there.”
Julie Wu, Author of THE THIRD SON, to be published in 2012 by Algonquin books, says:
“Amy is the rare reader who sees both the trees and the forest. She has the ability to set aside her ego to become emotionally engaged in a story and then, in a very no-nonsense way, pinpoint just what does and does not make it work. She was able in a single critique to tell me both that she was moved to tears and that I needed to fix certain inconsistencies in my timeline. Her comments would be invaluable to a writer of any level of experience and I couldn’t recommend her more highly!”
Pamela Toler, agented, published freelance writer and non-fiction author, says:
“Amy asks critical questions that open up possibilities within a story while displaying an understanding of the work as a whole.”
Priscille Marcille Sibley, THE PROMISE OF STARDUST, to be published by William Morrow, says:
“Sometimes a writer is too close to his/her own manuscript. At least, I was. It takes a keen eye and a true understanding of story to be able to see what the writer is overlooking. Amy Sue Nathan possesses both. And she has the talent to point out what I needed to do to make my story work.”

Am thrilled to find this blog! Talk Before Sleep by Elizabeth Berg is one of my all-time favorites. I would add Anna Quindlen, Cathy Holton and Ann Patchett, and can’t wait to read your list of Authors to Consider. Thanks!!
Ferris!!! Welcome! I can’t wait to read the authors everyone is mentioning. How am I ever going to have time for more writing??
Amy
Great first comment up there! Berg is my most favorite author, and I’m *currently* reading Talk Before Sleep. Love that little nudge of coincidence.
Anna Quindlen is also a favorite of mine, and I’m inspired by how she has her hand in women’s fiction, essays, narrative non-fiction, and columns.
How great to find this informative blog! Because I read and am also published in the women’s fiction genre. It is also timely because next month I’ll be doing a workshop at the Write on the River conference in Washington state that I’ve titled “The Mystique of Women’s Fiction.” It is indeed confusing to readers and writers alike and I feel you did a super job with your explanation and definition of this genre, Amy. Look forward to your future posts.
Terri, welcome! How exciting to know there’s a workshop on women’s fiction — I only wish it was in Chicago! I’m scheduling published women’s fiction authors for Q&As and guest posts and would LOVE to include you. Let me know if you’re interested! And…I just visited your website and added Spinning Forward to my TBR list. With all the new-to-me authors I’m learning about, I’m not sure how I’m going to finish these revisions on my book — but my agent is waiting (and hopefully so are readers)!

Amy
Absolutely, Amy! Thank you for the invite…I’d be very interested in doing Q&A’s and also a guest post. If it’s okay with you, I plan to mention you and your blog at my workshop and I’ll put your URL on my hand-outs.
Terri,
Wonderful – and thank you! Email me anytime at womensfictionwriters@gmail.com and we can figure out the details and get you on the schedule. Would love to learn more about your workshop too — and I bet so would the readers here.
Amy
I’m so glad I found your blog! I write Women’s Fiction and I’ve been finding a ton of blogs with YA writers, but not a lot of Women’s Fiction. Looking forward to reading more!
I agree, Katie — and that’s why I started this site! Glad you found us. Come back soon!!

Amy
I am working on my novel, Park Slope, which is women’s fiction, and am happy to have found your site! It will be done in October, then time to polish my query letter and find an agent!
Congrats, Karoline. Getting to the point of querying is so exciting. After so many months (or years) of writing and revising and rewriting and revising again — it’s the next step!!!
Hope you’ll visit us again!
Amy
Thanks, Amy! I’m sure I’ll visit again – your site looks really interesting!
I am so glad I found this! Thank you so much!
Passed on 3 blog awards to you today – Kreativ, Inspiring & 7×7. I know you’re busy and already successful, so I don’t expect you to deal with them, just wanted you to know how much I appreciate your blog!!!
Lisa Ann,
Thank you so much! I’d love to know more so I can acknowledge these in a future blog post. You’re a dear — and I am so glad you are enjoying WFW!!
xo
Amy
Not a comment but a quest. Ready to sub an 80k WF to Agents/ Publishers, but am finding the list of those accepting Women’s Fiction slim. And to make things more difficult, of those that are interested in WF, most are refusing unsolicited queries. My list gets smaller each time I sub.
The most shocking is Greyhouse, which last October listed its e-mail address & requirements, but no longer does.
So far I’ve subbed to Inkwell and BookEnds
Anyone care to comment?
Chloe Blaire
Hi Chloe,
Do you have a list of agents? Try querytracker.net to search. Things change, but I sent 116 queries so I know that there are agents out there who want WF! Good luck! Keep us posted!
Amy
Thanks, Amy!
Hi Chloe. I am also shopping for an agent for my WF. I have one agent with a partial ms. and one with the full ms. right now. I have a list of 121 agents that all took unsolicited WF queries, including Scott Eagan at Greyhaus. He started accepting queries as of March 1, unless he is closed again. I would be happy to email you my list of agents if you like. My email is karolineb@ymail.com.
Karoline-